Business Cards, Which To Go For...

Discussion in 'Lounge' started by Exige, Oct 3, 2015.

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  1. I've designed 3 and can't decide (all on the same theme) which should I choose...

    No1

    ES Card1.JPG

    No2

    ES Card2.JPG
    No3

    ES Card3.JPG
     
    #1 Exige, Oct 3, 2015
  2. Middle one.
     
    #2 Gimlet, Oct 3, 2015
  3. First one, but why has thunder got a capital T in the first two ?
     
    #3 wroughtironron, Oct 3, 2015
  4. Sorry fella, none.
    That blurb stinks of a hairy chest, Old Spice and a medallion.
     
    #4 triari, Oct 3, 2015
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  5. Was playing with capitals :Wideyed:
     
    #5 Exige, Oct 3, 2015
  6. I know what you mean - I did think of going more subtle and less 80's ad campaign :)
     
    #6 Exige, Oct 3, 2015
  7. [​IMG]
     
    #7 wroughtironron, Oct 3, 2015
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  8. Start again. The bike isn't the product. Promote the products. Sorry I don't like them, just trying to be helpul.
     
    #8 evoarrow, Oct 3, 2015
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  9. Good image - is that El T on his Distinguished Gentleman's ride? :Wideyed:
     
    #9 Exige, Oct 3, 2015
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  10. Yeh, understand - the product is promoted on the back as it's double sided.
     
    #10 Exige, Oct 3, 2015
  11. What's the back look like?
     
    #11 evoarrow, Oct 3, 2015
  12. R20.jpg
     
    #12 Exige, Oct 3, 2015
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  13. Bloody hell :Bookworm:
     
    #13 evoarrow, Oct 3, 2015
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  14. no 2. change the i can hear thunder bit. cheesy.
     
    #14 finm, Oct 3, 2015
  15. Honestly, I have to agree, the strapless line is a little cheesey.

    At least it's all constructive.
     
    #15 damodici, Oct 3, 2015
  16. I like the third one
    But I too think it's cheesy and looks like your selling a Ducati
    You need to have leads in there somewhere @Exige
    Your not promoting your product very well
    If I was looking for leads I wouldn't pick your business cards
     
    #16 Ducbird, Oct 3, 2015
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  17. This one could have lead me not into temptation but a quick start and your off :)
     
    #17 Ducbird, Oct 3, 2015
  18. You need exact lead on there
    Or exactly or start or exact start

    Your emphasis is on thunder and it's makes no sense :Oldman:
     
    #18 Ducbird, Oct 3, 2015
  19. it's business, he can take it. you dont need a punchy line for this product. keep it simple
     
    #19 finm, Oct 3, 2015
  20. upload_2015-10-3_15-1-2.jpeg
     
    #20 wroughtironron, Oct 3, 2015
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